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FIRST IN LINE (Benny/Doc/Andy/Casia)

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Offline Benny

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This is an oldie from about three years ago resurrected from grave...

Doc - guitars, lead guitar
Andy - bass
Casia - lyrics
Benny - guitars, drum programming, melody, lyrics, vocals, mixing


FIRST IN LINE

(V1)
I'm in a race to win your heart
But baby I don't know where to start
Has the time now come
To reach out for the sun

(Chorus)
As I walk along the shore
Fight the raging storm
To find a way that I can make you mine
I've never gone so high
As I run across the sky
Just to have a chance with you
I'll be the first in line

(V2)
I don't remember where or when
Love meant more than just pretend
You've been out of range
But that's all gonna change

(Chorus)

(Bridge)
Everybody wants love
A kiss and a warm touch
And I know what you need now
A love that won't hurt too much



Offline AndyG6508

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Hey Benny,

Thanks for letting me play a part in this upbeat little rocker!

Andy


Offline catfish

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Benny,

Love It !!!!
u'da man !!!

take care,
Al...
MUSIC is what feelings sound like...........
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Sounds great  :o
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Respect
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Offline Benny

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Doc and Andy...thanks for helping bring this one to life. 8)

Al and Paulo...thank you for taking time to listen and commenting. :)


Offline Zax

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Very nice!!
Love the melody in the chorus.
Benny, you have a cool sounding voice.

Frank


Offline atljam

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Cool tune, something refreshing and not really boxed into any genre.
Well done for all involved.
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Offline Casia - lyricist

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Nice to see this in the finished forum. A great addition to the collection.
Casia Productions:
ALBUM:A NOT Ordinary Christmas-2010
ALBUM:idream -2011
ALBUM:Trevor&Roger's 13 Stygian Tales - 2011

World Festival Universong showcase July 2012, Canary Islands, Spain - Victoria Linskaya 
http://www.reverbnation.com/casia


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Offline CosmicDolphin

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This is so catchy !

Benny you have the gift of writing great chorus melodies, I think you do it more consistently well than anyone on MCS. I also find your voice very listenable,  and you have a knack for structuring a pop song.... it's quite a disctinctive blend of elements and I like it when you do an uptempo number like this.  I did find myself wanting an extra chorus at the end...always leave them wanting Moore  ;D

( mix was pretty good but I heard better from you  ;) )
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i see a movie montage driving along a beach with the top down on a convertible and hair blowing in the wind.
nice song; nice feel
great job.
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I haven't checked the board in a while and what a nice batch of comments. :)  Thanks guys for having a listen and taking the time to let us know what you think of this one.


 

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