Very impressed with the vocals on this, I think you've done a really good job all around boys
I had a listen to the original after yours, don't know if you were trying to do your own thing or make it as close as possible but this is what I picked up between the versions.
I would say the drums sound drier on the original Free version, but there's a remix done 1991 where they seemed to plaster it in reverb ( which sounds awful ) so you picked the middle ground between really dry and too much verb.
The mix keeps the excellent lead vocal front and centre...actually the verse guitar on the original steps on the vocal more than the cover, so in that sense the mix improves on the original. Drums have a bit of a coloured lower mid sound, might be from the reverb partly. If you wanted to make it more like the Free version you could look at eq-ing the reverb return to tuck it in more behind the drums and vocals.
I know Steffen doesn't like very dry mixes, but this shows it's not just a recent thing !
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Actually now I'm listening back to back yours sounds a bit slower in tempo ? Unless my Pc has screwed up the file.
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