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The Innocent Cried (PVD/Pleasuredome/Thunder/Andy)

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Hi MCS,

Another epic sort of a tune.

Paul came up with a strong story-teller lyric, Steve conjured up an ethereal blend of vocals and screaming guitars, and Todd provided the hammer of the gods to rock this song out. Then Argle chipped in with an excellent mix.

Cheers guys, once again it's been a joy to work with you all! Not too bad for a 3 piece huh ;)

NickT and Paulo - Thanks for the comments/suggestions you have made while recording/mixing the song. Much appreciated :)

Andy


The Innocent Cried ((Dempsey/Gupta/McAndrew/Vierra (c) 2010/2012)

(v1)
The oracle's eyes flashed and rolled
As we listened intently to the tales she told
She saw a fawn (in a field)
Lying (so) perfectly still
While a pride of lions
Consumed their (latest) kill

(v2)
She spoke of gales and darkened skies,
Over falling trees and the ocean's rise   
(She saw) a blue robin's egg
As it fell its feathered nest
With no-one coming,
With no one saved

Pre-chorus:
Oh old woman with the knowing gaze
Is this the end of time, the end of days?
Is there a way to escape it all
Is now the time for Man to fall?

Instrumental Interlude: 1:51- - 2:07 ( over Dm/G x2)

Chorus: 
The innocents cry
Hear the innocents cry
As the rains pour down
Her visions have never lied

Repeat

Instrumental break: 2:39 - 2:51

(v3) 
She warned of wreckage and deep despair
Impending disasters, with a need to beware
She saw a small child
Struggle for breath
Head bowed down
Likely soon the sting of death

Pre-chorus
Oh old woman with the knowing gaze
Is this the end of time the end of days?
Is there a way to escape it all
Is now the time for Man to fall?

Chorus: 
The Innocent cry
Hear the innocent cry
As the rains pour down
Her visions cannot be denied

Repeat

(bridge)
She said it wasn't what should be
But rather what it could be
She stood to leave then she turned instead
Grabbed my hand so I would understand
I saw a vision of a robin with a chest of red
Circling a deer walking beside a young man

Solo 4: 48 -  5:19

Final chorus :
Still the innocent cried
Oh how the innocent cried
As the rains poured down
Showering visions that cannot be denied

Repeat

Outro: 5:52 till end.

The Oracle Band:

Paul Dempsey: Lyrics
Steve McAndrew: Lyrics, Lead and backing vocals, all guitars including solos
Todd Vierra: Drums
Andy Gupta: Music, lyrics, bass, hammond organ
Adam Kirby: Mix/master
« Last Edit: October 05, 2023, 01:29:17 PM by AndyG6508 »


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Sounds super, folks... Damn it's an epic indeed... Lovely organ, I said before that I couldn't do better than that and I say the same again...

Preciuos lyrics and vocals, solid bass and drums, great guitars and mix... What the hell could be better?  ;D
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Pretty Epic Guys.

Can't go wrong with Steve & Todd driving it along  >:D

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This is great Andy, very much enjoyed the listen.
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Thanks Paulo..glad you liked the outcome. Praise from a keys wiz like you means a lot!

Andy

Sounds super, folks... Damn it's an epic indeed... Lovely organ, I said before that I couldn't do better than that and I say the same again...

Preciuos lyrics and vocals, solid bass and drums, great guitars and mix... What the hell could be better?  ;D


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Hi Mark,

Thanks - they pretty much frog marched me to the finishing line  ;D

Andy

Pretty Epic Guys.

Can't go wrong with Steve & Todd driving it along  >:D

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Hi Tim,

Glad you liked the song, the kind comment is much appreciated :)

Andy

This is great Andy, very much enjoyed the listen.
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Everyone:

This taste so good, Andy and Steve enhanced my original lyric and it is that much better for it. 
Love this one, it's like I'm at a movie watching and listening, so well done.  I find I chase the ending......

Paul



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Wow! Lots of influences in here. Great rock music!

Superb collaboration with perfect, polished performances from all involved.

Paul - You must be so pleased with what these musicians created for around your lyrics.

Marvellous!


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Cheers Paul, your original lyric was the catalyst for the whole thing. Thank you for letting me run with this.

Andy

Everyone:

This taste so good, Andy and Steve enhanced my original lyric and it is that much better for it. 
Love this one, it's like I'm at a movie watching and listening, so well done.  I find I chase the ending......

Paul


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Hey Billy,

Thanks for dropping by and I am thrilled that you liked the song :).

I'm flattered that such talent helps me out with my music!

Andy

Wow! Lots of influences in here. Great rock music!

Superb collaboration with perfect, polished performances from all involved.

Paul - You must be so pleased with what these musicians created for around your lyrics.

Marvellous!


Billy.


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Simply wonderful to be a part of and it allowed me to display my Gilmour side!! 8) 8) 8) 8) 8)


 

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