Broken - Snowy, PVD, PleasureDome, Albino, j, floouk, CosmicDolphin

[snowdoguk]

Here's a rocker called "Broken" (formerly known as Revenge) featuring the awesome talents of:

Vocals: PleasureDome - Steve McAndrew
Keys: j - Jay Schankman
Drums: Albino -Steve Smith
Bass: Floouk - Gary Pownall
Mix/Master: CosmicDolphin - Mark Morgan-Shaw


Many thanks for all of your fantastic contributions guys and to Mark for stepping in to provide such a great mix.


Guitars/Music: SnowdogUK - Mike Woodford
Lyrics: PVD - Paul Dempsey

Broken Lyrics Paul Dempsey 2011
Intro

V1   You will hear my footsteps
They'll make you turn around
No matter what the city
Or no matter what the town
To meet your date with retribution
That will not be delayed
As I must fulfill the promise
That through a veil of tears was made

CH1   I will have two clenched fists
and the blood drain from my face
Revenge will be on my tongue
as will be so sweet the taste
As then the will be done
that will not meet with haste
Yes, you will be the one
that is finally laid to waste

V2    You may have been my father
But only in a name
With mom dead, broken hearted
With you the one I blame
You thought you were invisible
Like a phantom in the night
But I knew there'd come a day
That I'd expose you to the light

M8
And when I visit her grave
I'll let her know just what I found
Just a lonely old man,
Now broken, run aground

SOLO

M8
And when I visit her grave
I'll let her know just what I found
Just a lonely old man,
Now so broken

CH2     I will have two clenched fists
and the blood drain from my face
Revenge will be on my tongue
as will be so sweet the taste
As then the will be done
that will not meet with haste
Yes, you will be the one
that is finally laid to waste


V3   I won't be there to kill you
But will spit right in your face
Revenge will be on my tongue
as will be so sweet the taste
As then the will be done
that will not meet with haste
Yes, you will be the one
that i finally lay to waste

Outro
And when I visit her grave
I'll let her know just what I found
Just a lonely old man, now so broken, run aground
And when I visit her grave
I'll let her know just what I found
Just a lonely old man, now so broken

[Stoney]

Heavy stuff Guys .... Well done all round ...stonkin good 

[Albino]

In the thread I praised CD saying that this was a damn near perfect mix. I take it back, it is a perfect mix. WD everybody involved 
Keep it heavy and keep rocking 

[CosmicDolphin]

I've posted an updated master in the original thread, I think I overcooked the first one. 

Great tune guys, and Steve's vocalls are always a seal of quality  .....

Thanks for letting me loose on this one, I hate to hear good songs sound bad !

CD

[AndyG6508]

Super track guys! Top class write, performance and production by everyone concerned.

The arrangement is cool, different with a hypnotic quality to it. Reminds me vaguely of Stormbringer in spirit.

I-podded!!

Andy

[floouk]

Super track guys! Top class write, performance and production by everyone concerned.

The arrangement is cool, different with a hypnotic quality to it. Reminds me vaguely of Stormbringer in spirit.

I-podded!!

Andy

iPodded eh?  That'll do for me.

[floouk]

We're finished - hurrah!! another fab experience, working with some top class people.  It never ceases to amaze me what good stuff can be generated from a guitar riff and a few chords.

More power to your elbow Mike.

Well done to cosmic Dolphin for a mix we can be proud of.

And to the rest of you guys, it's been an honour. 

[PVD]

Guys:

Great final, it was interesting watching this one bounce back and forward.  It turned out much better than I originally thought, Steve vocals are great.
Mike, thanks for picking the lyric, you guys made it work well,

Paul

[AndyG6508]

prodded and podded gary mate

nice bass part btw

Super track guys! Top class write, performance and production by everyone concerned.

The arrangement is cool, different with a hypnotic quality to it. Reminds me vaguely of Stormbringer in spirit.

I-podded!!

Andy

iPodded eh?  That'll do for me.

[snowdoguk]

Guys.. the later mix is the better one in my opinion... the first mix is a little over-cooked... much better for the ipods

Thanks again Mark for returning to it...

[AndyG6508]

you mean the latter mix is better-i-poddausable?

Andy

Guys.. the later mix is the better one in my opinion... the first mix is a little over-cooked... much better for the ipods

Thanks again Mark for returning to it...

[snowdoguk]

v2 in the first post.... is a later mix than the original posted

[AndyG6508]

ahhh ok thanks!

v2 in the first post.... is a later mix than the original posted

[CosmicDolphin]

v2 in the first post.... is a later mix than the original posted

No it's just different mastering - same mix !

Cd

[Tricia41]

Very cool song, Men. Sounds a lot like Rush.