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Brand New Day

 

Offline Tricia41

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Brand new song for a brand new year!
 :) :)

Thanks guys for doing great work and for letting me sing!



Tricia    (Vocals,Lyrics,Vocal Melody)
Cyclone (Composer,Writer,Guitar)
PVD      (Lyrics)
Vincent (Writer,Composer,Bass,Lyrics,Vocal Melody,Producer,mixer)

A Brand New Day

(v1)
You wake up in the morning
You're looking in the mirror
Tomorrow is a brand new day
The air is warm and breezy
The leaves are moving freely
birds get up and then they fly away

(v2)
You're driving down the freeway
You're looking at the ocean
Watching all the cars go by
You take it nice and easy
Put on your favorite Dj
Helping you along the way

(chorus)
And now
You're finally seeing what's there
Not just passing it by
You've lost those blues
You're giving life a try
Oh, and by the way
Ain't it wonderful
The start of a brand new day
(v3)
You see the mountains standing
Off on the horizon
Swearing that they just appeared
The shadows from the soft clouds
Dance across the road and streets now
Like your blues, they'll disappear




Vincent

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Thanks for posting Tricia.

Chorus vocals sound great on this.

Programmed drums are a bit boring on this and my backup tracks are hissy...Other than that it sounds cool.

favorite part of mine on this is the flute riff after birds get up and fly away part.
« Last Edit: January 01, 2012, 08:30:48 AM by Vincent »


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Everyone:

Good job, well done, thanks for letting me get involved in this one.  It is a very catchy tune.

Paul


Vincent

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Nice job with the lyrics Paul...good stuff.

Thanks


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Turned out great.Well done Vincent,Paul, and Tricia.Thanks for letting me be a part.
Cyclone
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The judge says "First offender?"
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Sweet tune. Suits Tricia really well. The vocals are bit buried though. Sounds like they could come forward in the mix a bit more. Nice little tune.  :)

Dave


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Nice tune.
Live the best you can 'cause you're gonna be dead for a long time.
Respect
Paulo Gomes



Offline Johnny

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Great little tune ev'ryone!!!

Nice vocals again, Trish, you always deliver! ;)

Solid lyrics Paul with a lovely message...i always read the lyric, closely...

---a tiny nit for me---

i woke up, and i'm looking in the mirror...

Shouldn't that sing "Today" is a brand new day ::) :D

No big deal, but it stuck out to me...but then, "who reads the lyrics" ;D

It's a real, "feel good tune"

Delightful to the ears! ;)

Cheers!  8)


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STOPPPP!!!!!

Hold the bus dear friends!!!! >:(  :o :o :o

i had to re-listen,

This stands out too odd.....strange.....funny even  :o :o :o

To anyone seriously listening to this song, and i say this with only love i my heart  ;)

i pray i'm (not) sounding arrogant!  :-[

The lyric's Gotta sing "Today" ??? :o

In my humble opinion, TIFWIW....

cheers :-\

« Last Edit: January 07, 2012, 09:39:16 AM by Johnny »




Vincent

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 8)

Thanks for listening.

Yeah I liked the 3 syllables of tomorrow instead of today...even though the lyric makes more sense with the word today...The word tomorrow still works though because after all tomorrow is a brand new day.





 

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