No More!

[Captain fantastic]

This one is up for judgement,I had no takers ,so I had to to do it all,Nearly threw it in the bin but had one last stab at it,Its like Alice in chains (purposefully) & is about Domestic violence.

[cyclone]

This is cool.You hit the nail on the head sounds like them but it also sounds like you.You should sing more.
cyclone

[Errol]

Sounds great. I agree with Cyclone, you should sing more! Love the chord progression. 

[Captain fantastic]

Sounds great. I agree with Cyclone, you should sing more! Love the chord progression. 

I think I got lucky with the vocals on this,whenever I usually try I sound like a little girl!

[CosmicDolphin]

All sounds good to me too..You should definitely sing some more

CD

[Billy]

A very decent song and your voice really works. Kudos to you for tackling such a topic. I like the production and some neat effects used in the mix especially for the vocal....really adds some tension. I'm glad you decided to share it with us rather than chuck it in the bin.

Billy.

[soulfrontier]

captain that's fantastic  nice progressions  and an important topic.

[Captain fantastic]

Thanks for the feedback folks,I learn a little each day from everyones comments.

[Mr. Mom]

This is what I like about MCS and other collab sites also, is the individuality of the vocals. It's nice to hear "different" instead of 45 crappy covers of an overplayed mainstream song.
You sound fine to me Ralph, and there's never been a question about your musical skills.
Very nice.

John