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This is a re-mix of a song I did a few years back at Bobby's old EPS studio. Re-did the vocal track today. Luckily I still had all the old files except a strumming guitar track by Mimmo that was really nice but I was unable to use because it had corrupted.

Guitar - Nod
Bass & Drum Track - Bobby
Piano - Errol
Vox, Words & Music - Errol


I hear music outside my window
But I'm choosing to stay inside
Familiar voices now are calling
But it's so easy to wait and hide

There is beauty and wonder
And chances of
Contentment, laughter and love

There are promises and dreams
Where I belong
And yet it can all go wrong

The reflection inside my window
It still watches every day
No one's eyes should be so lonely
As a lifetime slips away


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"No one's eyes should be so lonely
As a lifetime slips away"

Haunting words Errol... your high standard is maintained with this rather sad but eerily familiar subject

Well done all
 
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"No one's eyes should be so lonely
As a lifetime slips away"

Haunting words Errol... your high standard is maintained with this rather sad but eerily familiar subject

Well done all
 


Thanks Mike  :)


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This is really lovely, Errol.  :)

And I agree with Mike: That last couplet is killer.
Quite poignant.  Altogether, a highly relatable song.

Good work on this one. ;)

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Another very pretty song, Errol. Real drums would be great, but I know the problem ... Ever dreamed about what music we all could post if we had our own band and orchestra?  ::)  8)

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Thank you very much, Donna, Tricia and Steffen. Thanks for listening.  :)


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Wow Errol, it's almost like this is the same guy from "Forgotten Man" that Roel sang about. I ABSOLUTELY love how the beginning of the 1st verse represents all that life has to offer (the music outside) and the final verse "reflects" where the problem lies, and the one obstacle to getting out and enjoying life. :)
Glad you resurrected this one Errol 8)
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Hi Chescook this is really a great song I like it  :). I'm playing this more this afternoon. You did a fantastic job! Thank you Chescook your friend Jimmy.


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