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A Tear Falls - Chesook, Appleluza & Cosmic Dolphin

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I started this collab a few years back but have been offsite since (unfortunately). I re-sang this today and think I'll call this one done unless I can replace my Kermit the Frog vocals...  :P  ...or if anyone wants to make any suggestions.

Appleluza did both the strumming and finger picking guitars. I wrote the words & music. Thanks for checking it out.
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Staying in this lonely room
Listening to the wind and rain
I lie awake
With swirling thoughts I can't explain

All the words I never said
Knowing I can't put things right
So I contemplate
The golden strands of morning light

And a tear falls
Another tear falls
When the emptiness calls
A tear falls
Another tear falls
My tears fall
For you

At night I walk alone
And the feeling comes again
I then call your name
And search the truth from deep within

The mistakes I know I made
And the schemes I had to try
Are now put away
With all the hopes we kissed goodbye
« Last Edit: January 02, 2011, 07:09:25 PM by Chesook »



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I never knew that Kermit can sing so pretty. :)

If you ever want to lend the frog to somebody, knock on my door! I can definitely use that voice!

Well done. Post more! :)

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Thanks Steffen. I guess most of us don't like the sound of their own voice. I'd be happy to try some vocals for somebody but I know I really do have a very limited range. I certainly will be posting more. I have a stack of unfinished or half written songs and I am always looking to try and help out wherever I can. Thanks for listening!  :)
« Last Edit: December 26, 2010, 03:16:15 PM by Chesook »


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If Kermit sings like this, lemme be Kermit.
Beautifull song... Beautifull song... Beautifull song... Beautifull song... Beautifull song.
Live the best you can 'cause you're gonna be dead for a long time.
Respect
Paulo Gomes


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Gee whiz! Thank you so very much!!!  :) It feels really great to be back at this site and getting involved in music again.  :) :)


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Nice job, Erol. Your vocal sounds good on this. I honestly don't remember doing the guitar part, but glad you could use it.

I'm going to take a page out of your book and try a more minimalist approach on a bunch of my songs - just my guitar, my voice and maybe one or two other little accent parts.  The spare arrangement is nice.

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I agree with Rob on this one Errol. I like the simplicity of this, reminds me of sitting with friends and a coffee at one of the local "open Mic" nights. 8)

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oh what a beautiful song!!!
Have you ever heard about Stephen Duffy???
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JD2hOykPNGQ&feature=related

He is one of the worlds greatest songwriter, he wrote hits for Robbie Wiliams and others and he has a lot of beautiful great songs.

Man, listen to your voice I could swear you ARE Stephen! How strange.
However, great song and performance you both.
« Last Edit: December 28, 2010, 11:04:02 AM by soulfrontier »


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Thanks guys! Really appreciate the comments.

I don't know Stephan Duffy but I will be sure to check him out.

It's great to be back at this site!!  :) :)


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I enjoyed this Errol!

As always, a very nice song.

Good job to you and Rob and good to have you both back!

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Errol, this sounds great!

I agree with others about the minimalist approach...For this song...it's perfect...unless you happen to know a good violinist ::) Cheers, Johnny



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Thanks Johnny. Yes, a violin would be nice. The door will always be open to new versions.  :)


 

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