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The Biggest Sale In Town (rock) Kenneth/'Drumbum'/Donna

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Offline Donna

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Some of you may remember the November 2008 incident when a young man, Jdimytai "Jimbo" Damour, was trampled to death by frenzied shoppers in an early-morning "Black Friday" sale at a Wal-Mart in Long Island. No one - including Wal-Mart, which had cut costs on security and building safety - was ever held responsible.  This angered me no end.  :P

I never thought the lyric would become a song. At least not until Ken (on Songcrafters.org) pounced on it a couple of weeks ago, and a drummer followed suit.   ;)

Music/Arrangement/Guitar/Bass/Vocals: Kenneth
Drums: Drumbum
Lyrics: Donna Devine

Biggest Sale in Town
« Last Edit: November 19, 2010, 11:13:40 AM by Donna »
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Hi Donna,

When I first read the great lyric, I was hearing a 'dark' vibe music to it, something like PODs "Youth of The Nation".

But I must say that the rock'n'roll-esque arrangement works well - the sombre theme sung with a cheerful 'fixed' grin feeling provides an unexpected twist and a strong contrast. Something which the Who have done quite often.

Good performances too - high on energy and sincerity. Well done all!

Cheers
Andy



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Nice tune! I like your lyrics Donna. Like Andy, I thought the music would have a darker feel, but the arrangement you did was splendid. Well done :)

Roger


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Some of you may remember the November 2008 incident when a young man, Jdimytai "Jimbo" Damour, was trampled to death by frenzied shoppers in an early-morning "Black Friday" sale at a Wal-Mart in Long Island. No one - including Wal-Mart, which had cut costs on security and building safety - was ever held responsible.  This angered me no end.  :P

I never thought the lyric would become a song. At least not until Ken (on Songcrafters.org) pounced on it a couple of weeks ago, and a drummer followed suit.   ;)

Music/Arrangement/Guitar/Bass/Vocals: Kenneth
Drums: Drumbum
Lyrics: Donna Devine
Some sale ,it makes you wonder about the folks that just stomped all over him & went on with their shopping?

Biggest Sale in Town


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The music sounds like rage and anger to me. A perfect fit IMO.

There are some minor issues with the vocal recordings/edits (plosives), but other than that I love everything about this song - lyric, music, performance, production.

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