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My Heart Was In Pieces

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Vincent

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We could of added more to this song however I have so many songs on the go i just figuered I would finish it as is.

Can always add to song in future some time.

Vincent (writer,composer,Lyrics,Vocal Melody,Guitar,Bass,Keyboard,Mix)
Tricia (Vocals,Vocal Melody,Lyrics)
CHHays (Drums)

« Last Edit: July 22, 2010, 11:06:13 PM by Vincent »


Offline Benny

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This is a nice simple, pleasant song. I like it. :)  This one could benefit by having a bunch of backing vocals surrounding Tricia's nice lead vocal.


Vincent

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Thanks Benny

Yeah the song could use some additions.

I like the way the song sounds however its not very interesting for the listener...its a decent little tune however its pretty much the same from beginning to the end...Song doesnt build up to anything and has very little dynamics.

I like it though...good melody.
« Last Edit: July 23, 2010, 10:52:32 PM by Vincent »


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I really like the simplicity of this song.  Sure its kind of repetitive but it works perfectly.

Catchy chorus.

Sounds great.



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Yeah. Nothing wrong with simplicity. Tricia has a great voice for this song and it sounds great as it is. I like it a lot.  :) 8)

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another nice tune from the great duo Vincent/Tricia!
Its a very good song and it reminds me one more time of Fleetwood Mac. very well done you both!


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I like it... Catchy keyboards line and cool vox melodie.

Yeh, there's nothing wrong with siomplicity, this one is the prove.
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Another great song Vincent even when you think it`s missing something your songs turn out great.Excellant job on the vocals Trisha.
 
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Yep, very nice tune.   
Re simplicity: Sometimes less is more. This is one of those times.  ;)

Good job all round. ;)

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As Holger said, very nice "Fleetwood Mac" sound. 8)
A little Lyndsay Buckingham harmonies and you guys are ready to go on tour. ;D

Take it from the "simplest" person here at MCS - simple is simply superb!

Great work Vinnie, Tricia, and Chuck!  :) :) 8) 8)
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