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WEIGHT OF THE WORLD

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I wrote this song a while back.  Pretty much about the fears of having to accept the responsibilities of the adult life (mortgage, wife, kids, bills,......),something that I think every working musician struggles balancing.  I'm pretty much in a different space now,.. but the song is definitely relevant for another time of my life and with every listen,...brings me back.  Ahhh music,... the melodic time machine!! ;D

Every one of my MCS friends came through for me on this one.  I couldn't be more pleased with the outcome.  Thank you sooooo much guys!! ;)

WEIGHT OF THE WORLD           
music and lyrics Jay Lamothe 2009
Drums...............groverk
Bass.................r4m
Guitars..............docmidnite
Mix/Master.........Argle
Keys/Vocals.......HDA

V1
These thoughts mystify me
These days terrify me
Take me back to yesterday
When my legs could run away,
and i know not the strains of responsibility

V2
Take all those who know me
Shake all those who think they know me
Well I have a new confession to make,
do you remember yesterday when i fell from the pain,
and then wallowed in your sympathy

CH
It's just the weight of the world
Verses the fate of the one

V3
Round up all you memories
Hide all of those treasuries
Keep them close for a rainy day
For when your back finally breaks,
let old dreams clean the stains of the sweat,
it flowed so liberally

CH

Solo

CH
« Last Edit: August 29, 2009, 04:38:56 PM by HDA »
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Turned out great Jay... excellent song with fantastic contributions from everybody...
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Jay.. I think that mp3 is corrupt... it cuts off at the end...
My dad.. "Turn that Banjo down!!"


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Thanks for the comments and the heads up Mike.  I re-posted.  This one should be ok. ;)
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Hey Jay

You have all done a fine job on this .....there is a lot happening and it has a really nice flow....very nice stereo spread and balance.

a great track ...well done

Cheers Ian


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Sounds great guys! Performance and mix are tight.

Nice job.

Nick
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Great song guys... Beautifull atmosphere and great playing... Mix sounds good too... Loved it
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Jay,
give us more of these!
Very proud being part of it!!!



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Jay,
give us more of these!
Very proud being part of it!!!



Your guitars always add the extra dimension to my songs but I have to tell ya Doc,.. the solo you created for this is incredible.  Thanks again!!
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Jay,
give us more of these!
Very proud being part of it!!!



Your guitars always add the extra dimension to my songs but I have to tell ya Doc,.. the solo you created for this is incredible.  Thanks again!!

 :-[  :-*


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I love this song, I was honored to have a small role in it.


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Nice track ,sounds tight like a real band.  :)

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I love this song, I was honored to have a small role in it.

Adam,.. I have this posted offsite and the reviews always mention the great mix.  Maybe your role was not so small!! ;)
« Last Edit: August 31, 2009, 11:48:57 AM by HDA »
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Wow guys...another jazz rock like materpiece.

I cant believe songs like these are not played on radio or not picked up by the fat suits from the record companies.

This is perfect in so many levels - vocals, guitars, keys, bass, drums not least a super vocal from Jay.

The piano-bass unison riff is a killer, and Doc's guitar playing is out of this world.

The mix is really fab - totally pro.

I guess I like this song :D

Cheers
Andy


 


 

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