Wow. I had *totally* forgotten about this one. Figured it was in the "oh well, guess it's not going to happen" stack. Did I really write some of those lyrics?
As I recall, Nick gave me the track with the chorus and said it's a song about a clueless guy hitting on a really hot babe.
There are some discrepencies between the printed lyric and what you're singing -- can you edit so the "true final lyric" is out there, with your tweaks?
Really cool song!