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Offline CosmicDolphin

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Been a while since I finished anything , but I've been beavering away in the background and I'm happy to announce my latest finished song.

Once again you guys have done me proud , it's been a fairly long collab ( 5 months ) ...quite alot of differnt people joining in , so quite a project to manage but well worth the wait.  Thanks to all the fantastic musicians below who helped me make this into what it is, I'm very happy with the final product  :)   I owe you all one !

I wrote it for my wife , who is a Gemini  ;)

Music - Lyrics - Lead Vox - Mix & Master :  CosmicDolphin

Drums       : Tmix Tom

Guitars      : Rattlehead - Pleasuredome - Vincent

Bass         : Canuk62

Piano
& Synths   : Billy & J

Backin Vox : Pleasuredome & Benny


I'm walking out the door
After all is said and done
I just grab my things and run
And we were a million miles apart
Then a billion stars they came but
They no longer write your name

And I was wishing for someone new
Then I ....saw her walk into the room


Chorus

Sweet girl from Gemini
With starlight in her eyes
I'm hoping she'll fall down to earth so
I can make her mine
Light years away from home
Burning through the ozone
She's lighting up the sky tonight
That girl from Gemini

Verse 2

She glided up to me
The constellation of her eyes
Almost caught me by surprise
And I ...was pulled in by gravity
And the depth within her soul
Swallowed me like a black hole

Then I .....Saw she was not alone
But I........I still want to take her home

RPT Chorus

RPT Chorus x 2


« Last Edit: August 20, 2009, 04:50:07 PM by CosmicDolphin »
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Offline AndyG6508

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Mark,

Really enjoyed the listen!!

Catchy melody and good hook to it.

Nice vocals, great playing by the band and a punchy clean mix!!

Well done!

Oh about the last two lines:

Then I .....Saw she was not alone
But I........I still want to take her home


and so you did...to mother perhaps  ;)??


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and so you did...to mother perhaps  ;)??

No I had my own place by then  ;)
We never finish a mix... we simply abandon them.
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Great songs are not written, they are re-witten


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Mark,

Really enjoyed the listen!!

Catchy melody and good hook to it.

Nice vocals, great playing by the band and a punchy clean mix!!

Well done!

Oh about the last two lines:

Then I .....Saw she was not alone
But I........I still want to take her home


and so you did...to mother perhaps  ;)??

I'm still pondering the line "swallowed me like a black hole"....naw, I won't go there! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
Great job guys!
Marc


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Mark,

This came out really great. Performance by all is top shelf and the mix is very clear.

Congrats to you all!

Nick
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Nice song CD...I like your vocals on this...has a unique style to them.

Glad i could help out with the song even though I only did the one main guitar riff...you got a lot of use out of it though and I like how you end the song with that riff as well.

I also liked the guitar work form the other players as well...like the harmonized ending lead riffs.


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I don't see my air guitar credit.... or maybe I didn't play on this one. Hard to tell.  ???

Nice mix. Sounds really great and a good job by everyone playing. Nice!!  8)

Dave


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Really great catchy pop song CD.  Great job everyone!!
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Well done guys!
The guitars really push this along. Another poptastic song Mark.  ^-^

Billy.


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This is a really cool song! Nice lyrics and hook. It belongs on the radio :)


Offline CosmicDolphin

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Thanks everyone for the kind words, just got back off my camping trip and read all the great comments.

 :)

CD
We never finish a mix... we simply abandon them.
You can't polish a turd, but you can always spray paint it GOLD
Great songs are not written, they are re-witten


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this turned out well! nice job everyone!  :)
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I wasn't happy with the final mix , so I've had another go - see if you prefer it over the previous one.

CD

We never finish a mix... we simply abandon them.
You can't polish a turd, but you can always spray paint it GOLD
Great songs are not written, they are re-witten


 

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