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Tricia41
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Good Things Daddy Told Me
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July 28, 2009, 04:57:03 PM
Vincent (Writer,Composer,All instruments,Mix)
Tricia (Writer,Vocals,Lyrics,Vocal Melody)
Good Things Daddy Told Me
http://www.reverbnation.com/triciadovidio#
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=817746&content=music
AndyG6508
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Reply #1 on:
July 28, 2009, 05:02:59 PM
Wow Tricia, Vincent,
A very different sound - 80s synth?? - which works very well with the lyric!!
Tricia, great vocals (sounds pro) and a good lyric - a bit more guitar and bass, this song could be from a Blondie album.
Well done!!
Cheers
Andy
Tricia41
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July 28, 2009, 05:15:19 PM
Thanks Andy! This was a funky one, was so quick, it almost wrote itself!
A fun little tune.
http://www.reverbnation.com/triciadovidio#
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=817746&content=music
stoman
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July 29, 2009, 03:55:43 AM
Woooosh, timewarp - we are back in the 80s!
Very nice tune. The mix needs more punch. Other than that: Great work!
Regards,
Steffen
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Vincent
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Re: Good Things Daddy Told Me
Reply #4 on:
July 29, 2009, 04:22:21 AM
Eventually we will add bass and keyboard to this once i buy a bass guitar...i will also add keyboard in the future as well once i get the proper midi chord/connection.
Song still needs stuff however we can alaways revise the song later on in hopes of improving...getting comments in finished works helps with improving the song later on.
Thanks for the comments.
stoman
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Reply #5 on:
July 29, 2009, 04:30:02 AM
I wouldn't add anything, Vince. I think the instruments are just right and perfectly arranged. Only the mix needs a bit more work IMO. Beef it up!
Regards,
Steffen
Always looking for opportunities to
mix your songs
. Feel free to ask!
My Introductory Post
Vincent
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Re: Good Things Daddy Told Me
Reply #6 on:
July 29, 2009, 04:37:26 AM
The mix could use more bottom end...im not very good at mixing midi tracks...never know where to start in regards to mixing midi.
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