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Good Things Daddy Told Me

 

Offline Tricia41

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Vincent (Writer,Composer,All instruments,Mix)
Tricia (Writer,Vocals,Lyrics,Vocal Melody)


Good Things Daddy Told Me


Offline AndyG6508

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Wow Tricia, Vincent,

A very different sound - 80s synth?? - which works very well with the lyric!!

Tricia, great vocals (sounds pro) and a good lyric - a bit more guitar and bass, this song could be from a Blondie album.

Well done!!

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Andy



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Woooosh, timewarp - we are back in the 80s! :)

Very nice tune. The mix needs more punch. Other than that: Great work!

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Vincent

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Eventually we will add bass and keyboard to this once i buy a bass guitar...i will also add keyboard in the future as well once i get the proper midi chord/connection.

Song still needs stuff however we can alaways revise the song later on in hopes of improving...getting comments in finished works helps with improving the song later on.

Thanks for the comments.


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I wouldn't add anything, Vince. I think the instruments are just right and perfectly arranged. Only the mix needs a bit more work IMO. Beef it up! :)

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Vincent

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The mix could use more bottom end...im not very good at mixing midi tracks...never know where to start in regards to mixing midi.





 

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