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Offline Studioplayer

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Might as well sneak one more into the pot.  >:D Turned out to be a pretty cool tune if I don't mind saying.  :) I was really on the fence with 2 leads so I'm just going to post them both. So there !!!  >:D

Dave

Credits
Donna - Lyrics
Jay (High Diving Act) - Vocals & Keys
Dave (Studioplayer) - Original Music, Guitars & Mix
Mark (Gerk) - Bass
Bill (r4m) Lead Guitar
Henry (Docmidnite) Lead Guitar
John (Jwoo) - Drums


Heaven

(v1)
Nicky the Nose can sniff out danger
Spot a phony who's on the make
Smash the intentions of any stranger
A quick once-over is all it takes

(v2)
Harry the Horse has an eye for the ladies
Mainly one type matches his taste
Likes her mean,  darker than shady
Svelte in black leather, a whip at her waist

Chorus
Grown men and their terrible toys
Closer to Heaven when they were still boys
They like their cars sleek with body-sized trunks
Are easily offended by snitches or drunks
An angel in Hell
Has their names on his list
Written in fire so none can be missed
He's watched them from birth
As they work to create
Their Heaven on earth

(v3)
Tony the Traveller went too far
A secret send-off is what he needs
He's being picked up in the Family car
For a short-notice trip to Eternity

(v4)
Sal and his Caddy are part of the game
He rolls to the curb as his eyes start to search
Moves to the window to take better aim
Knocking the Mother of God from her perch

Chorus
Grown men and their terrible toys
Closer to Heaven when they were still boys
Mack and his knife make a pretty sharp pair
They'll skin you alive without turning a hair
An angel in Hell
Has their names on his list
Written in fire so none can be missed
He's watched them from birth
As they work to create
Their Heaven on earth

(v5)
Here comes Louie, thinking Life is so grand
Sal in his Caddy does not miss a beat
Leans from the window, weapon in his hands
Louie does his bullet-dodging dance on the street

(v6)
They take what they want at the drop of a gun
Power and luxury, pleasure and fame
Murder and mayhem, some do it for fun
Good or evil, to them it's the same

Chorus
Grown men and their terrible toys
Closer to Heaven when they were still boys
No more fedoras or pin-stripe suits
But they still know how to make concrete boots
An angel in Hell
Has their names on his list
Written in fire so none can be missed
He's watched them from birth
As they work to create
Their Heaven on earth

Copyright: D.Devine 2008
« Last Edit: February 01, 2009, 09:11:46 PM by Studioplayer »



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came out nice ... good lyrics and vocals ...


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Sounds cool man! Another Trippy tune!

Nice job.

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Thanks guys. Got Docs lead up now as well. IF anyone has a preference let me know. Thanks!!  :)

Dave


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Oh... I forgot to mention that these are REALLY COOL lyrics Donna. Some great lines in here. Nice !!  8)

Dave


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Thanks, Dave.  ;)  Your original bedtrack appealed to me straightaway, and Aidan's comment about Quentin Tarentino triggered the idea of "gangsters". The lyrics were heaps of fun to write. ;D

Donna
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The lyrics were fun to sing and though it seemed wordy in the beginning,...everything seemed to fit perfectly after a little tweaking.  Great imagery Donna.  The whole song seems to work well.

Thanks for letting me play in the sandbox Dave.  This was very very cool to be a part of.

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Jay, I was amazed when you stepped in with your vocals and with a great melody already in place!
I'd thought getting a melody would be the hard part.  ;)
You did a fine job. :D   The keys are wonderful too. I love the way the organ builds up in the solo section.

Donna
« Last Edit: February 02, 2009, 12:43:13 PM by Donna »
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cooool  8) song Dave!
I have no preference, both versions are great. Nice and groovy.
I like the mix too.
 :)


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Thanks Holger.  :) Lets do some songs together this year.  ;)

Dave


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Thanks Holger.  :) Lets do some songs together this year.  ;)

Dave

yes Dave, lets do it!  :) I hope that we will catch the chance to work together on some tunes this year.  :)


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Awesome song Dave and the rest of the gang! No matter which way you go, this is a sweet tune.
I feel like I am watching a gangster movie!!! I feel it!! Way to catch the feel Dave! Way to describe it Donna! I gotta look behind me every few seconds. Rym section is second to none!! Love the bass tone!
Great vox!! Keys are killing me!
BTW...my car has a body size trunk! ;D


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BTW...my car has a body size trunk! ;D

Bill, is that a guitar or a shovel you're standing behind? ;D

Donna
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Hi Everyone,

This tune turned out great.

Nice swampy bluesy-rock feeling to this - suits the dark lyrics to a T!

Great playing by the band and super singing by Jay..

Great stuff - nice mix too.

Andy


 

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