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Offline CosmicDolphin

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on: February 01, 2009, 04:08:45 PM
I'm pleased to be able to announce this song finished  :)

This one has been hanging around for 5 or 6 years now...the original was in Sonar 2  ;D

It's one of those songs where I could never arrange it the way I heard it in my head for it until I joined the MC....big thanks to all those who chipped in. I think it came out rather well.  Don't worry, after this it'll be back to the up tempo guitar synth pop rock songs  >:D

Credit

Words - Music - Synths - Vocals -Mix   CosmicDolphin

Drums - Todd Thunder

Guitars- PleasureDome & Studioplayer

Piano  - Lindy

Strings- PaulD

BV's    - Ali Kat



 

Simple




It's simple, so simple
You own me
Is that simple enough
When you finally prevail and I just need to inhale so deeply
It's blameless, disruptive
So shameless yet destructive
And you know I'll never win
'Cause they'll say it's such a sin to want you


Chorus

But you're giving me some hope   
That I'm found
You know you got me turning around
And when it finally all calms down
You know just what to do


Verse 2

You lead and I'll follow
This love feels so hollow
I need you to make whole
Then I'd feel I've got control of something

It's taking , Without giving
It's like life but without living
And I know that it's a crime but I'd gladly do the time to have you....


RPT Chorus

Mid 8

And anway the world is falling

In every way , you hear me calling out to you

I'll let it out for you

'Cause it's so simple

Key Change - RPT Chorus  x 2

Ending

Givin' me some ho-pe , ho-ope , ho-pe

You give me ho-ope , ho-ope , ho-ope

You give me ho-ope , ho-ope , ho-ope

That I'm found

That I'm found

« Last Edit: December 30, 2009, 11:09:53 AM by CosmicDolphin »
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Reply #1 on: February 01, 2009, 04:26:11 PM
Sounds cool CD.

Nice job. Wish I had the patience for the keys.

Cool key change. :)

Nice job all!

Nick

PS - You could trim the ending  >:D
« Last Edit: February 01, 2009, 04:27:53 PM by NickT »
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Reply #2 on: February 01, 2009, 04:57:19 PM
Crazy tune brother. You add so much it's nuts.  :D I think it came out pretty fine in the end. Glad you were mixing it. I would get totally lost on something like this. Nice one CD !!  8)


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Reply #3 on: February 01, 2009, 05:04:48 PM
Quote from: Studioplayer on February 01, 2009, 04:57:19 PM
Crazy tune brother. You add so much it's nuts.  :D I think it came out pretty fine in the end. Glad you were mixing it. I would get totally lost on something like this. Nice one CD !!  8)



Cheers Dave

This one is quite straight forward...just the guys on the credits and my bass synth...no flashy stuff , just eq - balance and fader rides..as straight as it get Bro !
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Reply #4 on: February 01, 2009, 05:05:31 PM
Quote from: NickT on February 01, 2009, 04:26:11 PM

PS - You could trim the ending  >:D

that's the hidden track that only dogs can hear  8)
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Reply #5 on: February 01, 2009, 05:07:46 PM
Cool bro,drums mix sounds good for the song. :)
Todd

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Reply #6 on: February 01, 2009, 05:10:31 PM
Quote from: Thunder on February 01, 2009, 05:07:46 PM
Cool bro,drums mix sounds good for the song. :)

Cheers Bro

I wanted lots of room sound to make it sound really big.....I think it worked!

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Reply #7 on: February 01, 2009, 05:17:48 PM
Hey CD,

This is really good. Excellent song and great mix.

Benny

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Reply #8 on: February 01, 2009, 05:19:15 PM
Quote from: Benny on February 01, 2009, 05:17:48 PM
Hey CD,

This is really good. Excellent song and great mix.

Benny

Thanks Benny...feels good to finally hear it done after so many years !
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Reply #9 on: February 02, 2009, 11:17:20 AM
Super,smashing,lovely  ;) ;)

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Reply #10 on: February 02, 2009, 01:10:55 PM
Quote from: PaulD on February 02, 2009, 11:17:20 AM
Super,smashing,lovely  ;) ;)

Look what you could have won...
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Reply #11 on: February 02, 2009, 01:37:06 PM
WoW! Great song! Nice everything!! 8) Great vox!!!
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Reply #12 on: February 02, 2009, 02:01:59 PM
This is nice mark! Good production and support all the way around.

AJ

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Reply #13 on: February 02, 2009, 02:04:00 PM
Quote from: srvfender on February 02, 2009, 02:01:59 PM
This is nice mark! Good production and support all the way around.

AJ

Hey thanks AJ !....don't be a stranger !
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Reply #14 on: February 02, 2009, 02:25:51 PM
Hi Mark,

No one does this kind of "brit pop" better than you.

Brilliant melody - interesting arrangement too- kind of London Suede at times perhaps?

Cheers
Andy

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