Goodbye/Cool Beyond Zero

canuk62 · **on:** January 31, 2009, 01:31:27 AM

Hi everyone, sneaking in the latest from the Cool Beyond Zero bunch (formerly Sewer Pipe Boyz) before the deadline is up on the CD nominations.
The boys blasted this one out in record time..and she's rockin' really hard on this one

, and I'm really proud how well everyone did on it. I wrote it back in October, it's an autobiographically based tune dealing with some issues I'm dealing with.This is my first attempt at a mix to post, probably will tweak as the comments roll in on it..big learning curve on this stuff!

Anyway, hope it does get a couple votes, thanks in advance!

Marc

(new mix/master Feb 11)

Goodbye (Traynor 2008)

Pleasuredome:vocals/guitars
J (formerly Jaaman): Keyboards
Thunder (formerly Moseskane):drums/percussion
Canuk62: Bass/Acoustic guitar

The doctors gave the word today, better soon plan for the ending as it's not far away,
The tests have all but sealed your fate, only God-given miracles can take it away,
In this life we have the path we need need to roam,
Where it ends is in God's hands, mere men will never know,
But it's hard to tell your kids you'll go away,
And it's even harder when you'll have to say
Goodbye

Thinking of this life I've known,many things that I'm so proud of, like the seeds that I've sewn,
I pray the good outweighs the bad,and I made the most of kindness with the options I had,
I know I shouldn't think of things that might have been,
Had I chose a different path that led from my sin,
There's no point dwelling on things that cannot be undone,
The end will need forgiveness, should I stand by the Son

Chorus:
My Love, Goodbye
There's nothing proved by sorrow in the tears that I cry,
My Love, goodbye
I pray this journey's starting and we'll meet on the the other side.

Lead

My Love, Goodbye
There's nothing proved by sorrow in the tears that we cry,
My Love, goodbye
I pray this journey's starting and we'll meet on the the other side

My Love, Goodbye
There's nothing proved by sorrow in the tears that we cry,
My Love, Goodbye
I pray this journey's starting and we'll meet on the the other side

Oh Goodbye
My love Goodbye
My love Goodbye

Oh how I love you

CosmicDolphin · **Reply #1 on:** January 31, 2009, 04:07:09 AM

Nice one boyz...sure does rock hard ! I think I lost a filling

CD

Tricia41 · **Reply #2 on:** January 31, 2009, 05:18:37 AM

So cool!

j · **Reply #3 on:** January 31, 2009, 07:01:16 AM

Quote from: Tricia41 on January 31, 2009, 05:18:37 AM

So cool!

sure has my nomination! this is one that I think we worked particularly hard on, mostly in your absence while we were awaiting your recovery. I remember the comments that this was not going to be your goodbye song, and either through the miracle of modern medicine, the miracle of prayer, or just your refusal to give in, we are lucky to have you around with us.

not to mention the fact that this is a great song, and congratulations to the extra effort from all involved. This among others from the CBZ/SPB deserve to be heard! A big pat on the back to all the Bros.

Pleasuredome · **Reply #4 on:** January 31, 2009, 08:21:48 AM

Great to be a part of Mark and the boyz.......Cool!!

It's just a well crafted song from the Traynor stable....oh no, anothger band title Traynor's Stable

Thanks too friends

NickT · **Reply #5 on:** January 31, 2009, 08:57:45 AM

Nice job guys.

Cool song. Chorus is a nice cross of Purple and Sabbath, nice feel.

Nick

Pleasuredome · **Reply #6 on:** January 31, 2009, 09:02:03 AM

Thank you Nick

I'd never thought about it that way Nick, regarding Purple Sabbath but you're absolutely right bro

NickT · **Reply #7 on:** January 31, 2009, 09:03:54 AM

Quote from: Pleasuredome on January 31, 2009, 09:02:03 AM

Thank you Nick

I'd never thought about it that way Nick, regarding Purple Sabbath but you're absolutely right bro

Hey - another good band name! Purple Sabbath!

canuk62 · **Reply #8 on:** January 31, 2009, 09:07:05 AM

Quote from: NickT on January 31, 2009, 09:03:54 AM

Quote from: Pleasuredome on January 31, 2009, 09:02:03 AM
Thank you Nick

I'd never thought about it that way Nick, regarding Purple Sabbath but you're absolutely right bro

Hey - another good band name! Purple Sabbath!

Must have had Ozzie in the brain I guess...thats what you get writing songs on oxy contin awaiting surgery!

(the purple is my Scottish friend!

)
Thanks everyone for the kind comments...got so many in stable here awaiting to be let out their getting jumpy!

docmidnite · **Reply #9 on:** January 31, 2009, 11:36:00 AM

Wow, another canuk-song!
Hey, bro, why are you still here and not in Hollywood??
Great Rock tune!
Great guitar work!

Donna · **Reply #10 on:** January 31, 2009, 11:49:05 AM

The energy and love in every atom of this song is tangible.

A remarkable production. Well done, EVERYONE!

Donna

Pleasuredome · **Reply #11 on:** January 31, 2009, 11:52:14 AM

Thank you Doc and Donna,

This was simply a case of building on Marc's remarkable inspiration

Stoney · **Reply #12 on:** January 31, 2009, 05:27:04 PM

Well done all ..a bit of rock does a body good....very hot track

Ian

r4m · **Reply #13 on:** January 31, 2009, 10:04:09 PM

Nice Job guys! Great song!!
Easy on that whammy bar Steve!!! I think you burried it in the body!!!

Pleasuredome · **Reply #14 on:** February 01, 2009, 12:41:11 AM

Thanks Bill,

I was thinking Ritchie