All Eleven Stories

[tnolan]

Not finished but you will get the idea.

[Eugene Lyricist]

Hey this is good. Like your vocals.

[Studioplayer]

Cool song. Man I can really hear drums etc. kicking into this tune. Great vocals. 

Dave

[groverk]

Hey Travis,

Just so you get an Idea on how this works I added some drums to your song. Just listened to it once and then hit record the second time.

For future reference

When you want opinions on a song post it under Musical Opinions.

When your ready for everyone to add stuff to it post it under Project Studio A.

When it's all finished then post under Finished Works.

So give it a listen 

See Ya

Ken

[soulfrontier]

Hey,

great tune, but what do you wish to do with it? Is it finished, or do you look for auditions?

hey groverk, great job!

[Studioplayer]

Nice Ken. That brings the song up a notch. 

Timing seems a bit off. Playing to a click?

Btw. The effect at the end doesn't work as well as it does for the start. The timimg is off on that. I see what your trying to do. I'd tweak it a bit better. Just my 2 cents for what it's worth,

Dave

[groverk]

Thanks Soulfrontier,

Yeah Dave I'm sure my timing is off and I did not use a click. I just gave it a quick listen and then recorded the 2nd time through. Just wanted to show Travis how the collab thing works.

Ken

[Studioplayer]

Just wanted to show Travis how the collab thing works.

Works great around here Travis.   

It's amazing what these guys can do via the net. Some amazing songs pumping out of this place. Helps to have drummers like Ken. 

[CosmicDolphin]

Hey Nice song....well performed

Sounds even better with drums though...are you going to work it up fully ?

CD

[bonanza]

If this song were to be done professionally it would really be a great project

The drums gives a taste of what it really could be. The main like that is repeated would be better served as not so repetitive. There is nothing wrong with that but limit it some may help. Nice sound. Maybe a fender on the guitar. The synthesizer  sound is no so good for the song though. It appears only a couple times at most and  takes away from the song some. Sounds like a good old rocker with a twisting ballad feel. With the help of the crew this can become something very special. There were a couple of spots were the vocals could use harmonies or backings and even adjust spots of the pitch.

Regards

Bonanza