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Offline tnolan

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on: August 05, 2008, 04:14:12 PM
This is a song i did a while back. Just wanted to get some input.

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Reply #1 on: August 05, 2008, 04:17:16 PM
It sounds like a nice song and you sing it well but the guitar sounds out of tune to me...


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Reply #2 on: August 05, 2008, 04:43:00 PM
I do like this one. Very nice song.
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Reply #3 on: August 05, 2008, 05:43:11 PM
Really nice vocals. I could hear this one build up a bit with some more instruments. Guitar sounds in tune to me. Capo'd ? ???

You could keep it as it is. That's fine. Or add some acoustic guitar bass & drums or add some electrics.

Nice song, nice voice.  :)

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