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Destiny........Catchy little Rock number

 

Offline CosmicDolphin

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Where do I start  :D

I wrote this at the end of March, posted up an acoustic version on April 1st ( no joke ) and here we are with a fully fledged song all finished.

It was one of those songs that just flowed out like a stream of conciousness , I only spent about half an hour figuring out the chords and lyrics, I wish all songs came so easily.

When I posted it , I had no idea that Pat ( Rattlehead ) was a mind reader.  Sometimes you get good auditions that are different to your ideas, sometimes you get auditions that don't fit...but Pat totally nailed the main guitars and even better than I'd heard them in my own head  :) , and without that I don't think it would have turned out half as well as it did..it really made me think it was a cool song to carry on with ... Thanks Pat !

Marc laid down a great bass, then Robert's drums really added an extra dimension, as did Steve's Bv's and extra Guitars.

Now the keys....I had to fight really hard to get those ! ...I think I Pm'd everyone whose an ivory tinker and they all thought it sounded full and could really come up with anything....until Lindy came along...another mind reader...he really nailed his parts too.  I'm lucky.  I knew it could be done, you just gotta have faith.

Now I guess the song is about faith and destiny, and making your own destiny...it's also a bit of Romeo & Juliet type love story...

Destiny


Verse

You and me
We were so care-free
Never took the time to contemplate our life
Till another came just like a hurricane
You tried to take the blame while I twisted the knife

Bridge

Now we're starting to lose hold
Of everything that binds so tightly in our soul ..


Chorus
Cause you and me we wrote our destiny on the shifting sands of time
You carved your name right next to mine
Then you broke free and tried to run from me
Now I just can't you back and I just have to face the fact
That I'm all alone


Verse 2

Darker nights are closing in on me
I barricade myself against the rising tide
You come to me , but only in my sleep
When I wake up there's no place left to hide

Bridge 2
Then we start to lose control
We can be together if just can let go

Rpt Chorus

Rpt Bridge

Rpt Chorus

Words & Music :   CosmicDolphin

Main Vocals     :   CosmicDolphin

Guitars           :   Rattlehead & Pleasuredome

Extra Vocals    :   Pleasuredome

Drums            :   ODT

Bass              :   Canuk62

Piano & Strings:   Lindy

Mix & Master   :   CosmicDolphin


You were all fantastic guys !

CD
« Last Edit: July 19, 2008, 11:26:31 AM by CosmicDolphin »
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Yeah, what a mother to pull off...now I know why it takes U2 5 years to cut an album...great job guys! :)
Marc


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Yeah, what a mother to pull off...now I know why it takes U2 5 years to cut an album...great job guys! :)
Marc

Five years, a half-hour at a time.   ;)

I'm gonna listen again.  I'm sure I'll still like it.


Thanks for the PM, CD, that reeled me into this one. It was a pleasure.


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You guys know what you do and how to do it! :)
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Nice one Mark!  I agree.....very catchy! Well done guys!


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You guys know what you do and how to do it! :)

Thanks...sometimes they come out ok !
We never finish a mix... we simply abandon them.
You can't polish a turd, but you can always spray paint it GOLD
Great songs are not written, they are re-witten


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This song was a nice departure from my heavier side guys and it always makes me smile, there's something so happy about it :) :)

Great work everyone and a mountain of things to get in there Mark, you did it good bro!


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I love it.  Great job everybody!  I was playing one of the unfinished tracks the other day and my 8yr old daught and 4yr old son were singing along after a while too!  Great tune!  My wife really likes it too!

Kudos all around!

-Jeff


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Great one...  8)
Live the best you can 'cause you're gonna be dead for a long time.
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Hey DC... In some places you remind me of Johnny Ramone singing  :D... Really... Some spots.
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Nice job gang. Very pop. Nice upbeat tempo. I love the signature guitar riff.

Really good mix and master.

Another candidate for MC Artists Vol II?

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Thanks Everyone..you all rocked...I'd be very proud to make the next CD  :)

CD
We never finish a mix... we simply abandon them.
You can't polish a turd, but you can always spray paint it GOLD
Great songs are not written, they are re-witten


 

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