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Offline Sharpola

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« Last Edit: March 28, 2008, 12:16:40 AM by Sharpola »


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That sounds cool Ray. Different for you!

I like the lyrics Mike.

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Hey Ray... sounds real good... I'm glad we made those minor changes, it runs smoother vocally....

I'm in work and can't crank the sound.... is that the sound of a train in the first 22 seconds? 

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Cool...I like the way the guitar pickin' kinda sounded like a train on the tracks.  8)

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Mike/Ray:

Very nice and quick too.  I like the point of reference for the story.

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Excellent song... as Nick alluded to.. a departure fro the norm for you ray.. mike Great Lyrics! I agree.

I'd have liked to hear a single kick drum thumping the time out.. would have worked for me.. and added I think to the potency of the message.. but thats just me.. a drummer... what do I know..

A+ on this one fellas!


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Very nice Ray. Love the finger picking guitar. Works really good just guitar & voice. Gives it that bluesy groove. Kinda old school.  8)


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Sounds great, guys!

I'd love to hear some harmony vocals like in the movie "Brother, Where Art Though."

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I'd be honored to give it a try, Ray! I may have to sing it an octave lower but that could sound pretty good. Do you have a voxless?
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« Last Edit: April 01, 2008, 03:00:24 PM by TallPaul »
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Ray, it would help to have your vox sep as well for reference purposes. I tried panning hard right on your mix above, but there's still guitar in the mix.
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Nick, could you purge this thread and we'll redo when the songs complete?

Thanks
Ray


 

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