I Dread Daybreak

[Appleluza]

Nice job on this.  Loved the nylon lead part especially.

Rob

[youtube]

I listened to this prior.

Here is my comment or feedback.

I love this version. The Reggae feel with the acoustic guitar.  The drums on demand sound fantastic and they should.  The mix is excellent and it is really a cool tune. The voice is really cool. Vocal wise for future project Ali just what the in places. Maybe have a few more runs at it. Other than that Ray really delivered. So did the others.

Great Work

Congrats.

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[Ali Kat]

Check out the rap I got a guy to lay on it.  Let me know what ya'll think.  He goes by Ballstar.  I think he nailed the lyrics for it.  BUt, I am probably going to play around with the vocal seps a bit, see if I can't get it to "fit in" to the song a bit better. 

Ali

[CosmicDolphin]

I thought you'd have Ludacris himself working on it by now 

That's really good Ali...like it

I think you just need to work on the ending where you come back in

CD

[Ali Kat]

haha, I wish....I thought the same thing about the end of the rap. I also think it may sound better with just one of the vocal tones with some thickness.  He's gonna get me the seps and I'll play around with it for awhile...see what comes of it, and I'll repost it here when I am done. 

Ali

[detune]

It struck me that the rap should be 8 bars instead of 12.  There's something odd about it being 12 bars, and it feels a bit long.

This song makes me feel good every time I hear it.

Mark

[Ali Kat]

great feedback, keep it comin everyone~!

[Sharpola]

I like it... very cool! my (our) first rap tune

Ali could I have the seps as well? I'd like to try my hand at making it transend to the outro part as well

Ray

Check out the rap I got a guy to lay on it.  Let me know what ya'll think.  He goes by Ballstar.  I think he nailed the lyrics for it.  BUt, I am probably going to play around with the vocal seps a bit, see if I can't get it to "fit in" to the song a bit better. 

Ali

[Ali Kat]

absolutley, I really am not very good at that sort of thing...but I was willing to try to get my vision acrossed a bit better than he did.  I'll get them to you as soon as I have them myself! 

Ali Kat

glad ya liked it.

[PVD]

Ali/Ray:

I have been listening to this quite a few times to try to get the overall feel.  I think Ballstar did a pretty good job.  I'm still trying to get my head around it.  If you guys like it, I am fine with it.  I still may listen to and prefer the earlier version, that's just me.

Paul

[detune]

This rap is really growing on me, all 12 bars.  I'm going to take back what I said earlier.  It's great the way it is.

Mark

[Bassic_Soul]

 

[NickT]

Sounds pretty cool. I'd like to here the rap a little more defined.

Nice job.

Nick

[Ali Kat]

Okay I played with the rap.  He only gave me a mixed vocal sep...so I wasn't able to split the tones...but I still played with it how I could.  Let me know what you think.  I tried to improve the end of the rap.  I did a little echoing in spots.   And, I thickened his vocals up to fit a bit better in the song.   Ray, if you still want the seps let me know...though I know it would've been nicer to have both takes seperately....but ya get what ya get for now.

Ali

[Sharpola]

Ali sounds great!

I'd still like the seps to save with the project if I could

Ray