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Love Again

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Offline PaulD

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;D ;D finally got one finished.



Ali Kat  : Vocals/melody/Lyrics
Guitar : Studioplayer
PaulD : Keyboards
Bass  : Walter
Mixing : NickT

When the road leads me down that path one more time
I promise I'll try
When the wind blows a chance by me I'll see
If I can get by

Chorus
But my heart is worn
It feels just like I
Have been broken and scorned
The pain is too surreal
I can't hang on
I don't know if I can love again

When the trees begin to bloom in spring
i'll still be on my own
Wehn the leaves begin to wilt and die
I'll know, my hearts not alone

chorus

bridge
I'm traveling down a lonely road
A change of wind is my only hope
This heart has shriveled into dust
Along with my trust.


Thanks everyone for helping me out ;).

PaulD
« Last Edit: December 06, 2007, 09:32:29 AM by PaulD »


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I think this is a really beautiful song.....my only wish is to hear it with a real acoustic guitar instead of a keyboard imitation :'(

I think it's the best ballad I've heard on the MC, and could really be magical with the right balance instruments on it, and a proper ending.

As it stands it's still very good, and a heartfelt vocal by Ali.

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I think this is a really beautiful song.....my only wish is to hear it with a real acoustic guitar instead of a keyboard imitation :'(

I think it's the best ballad I've heard on the MC, and could really be magical with the right balance instruments on it, and a proper ending.

As it stands it's still very good, and a heartfelt vocal by Ali.

CosmicD

Thx CD,

I was debating wether or not to get a real guitar for that part,but as i really liked what i allready had
and wasnt too sure if it could be done in a similar way on the guitar i didnt,maybe i should have asked :-[.

Anyway im happy with the way it turned out.

PaulD



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You could always ask for an audition...

I'm sure someone here could pick the same rhythm.

Maybe next time ?....long as it came out how you want that's the most important thing.

Anyway...great song.

CosmicD
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Beautiful song.

I very much enjoyed it.

IF you ever want some classical guitar on it or anything let me know.

Wegman


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Sounds really nice guys. Glad to have been a part and glad you got one done Paul.  8)

Dave


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Outstanding!  nice mix and great performances all around.  :)
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Good job team.  Nice song.
Rob Talbert, Songwriter and Producer for Appleluza, a virtual multi-genre band.


 

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