ok, first impression... the two cymbal tracks are exactly the same
knowing Cary... the vocal track has an (obvious) edit somewhere.
won't get into clipping, compression, fx and/or quality of tracks, but i think, after this is done, if it's ok w/ the trackers, we should use this song for a recording clinic/discussion where we talk about what was done and possible alternatives/improvements.
as far as taking more time than others, or not wanting to get into too many technical details... don't let these things stop you. it's not a race. and fwiw, i do things by trial 'n error and feel. tech knowledge is not necessary.