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"Johnny hasn t come home lately ? or Revised .title."Johnny"

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This song started out as a simple country song i composed several months ago
with no idea that this song would b liked and such creative talent here on MCS.

Many thanks to Christina Britton....vocals lead
HER back up choir..god bless to all and many thanks
Right on the MARK . Mark a Shrider.../also advisor and Guitar leads
Johnny for his superb lyrics . .that made this song come alive
Drums...Figsounds..
Mixing...Steffen Offermann..and Mastering
Andy Gupta...superb bass playing....!

aNY ONe  i may have missed as i am still recovering from final
flu ellements..please let me know and make sure i spelled names
right and proper credits.


PSS....last minute credit to STEFFen Offermann  for his great mixing as always
please let me know if i missed anyone cheer s NEIL
i wILL b posting this song on several major sites. inc soundclick
and also I WILL ENTER THE SONG for the VH1 song of the year.
contest. one never know.s for 75 dollars worth a try .!

Again god bless to all and for everyone time and patience..AND TALENT
NEIL !

Psss..geez. all these last minute thought... s i will take care also of registering
the song with BMI AND TO THE LIBRARY OF CONGRESS. so should the song ever
become a radio song and etc. !


Now we have the song at top and bottom lo . sorry but honestly the meds
can play havoc with me i try my best thanks all so kindly once again NEIL


Original composition: Neil Swansong
Lyrics: Johnny Williams and Marc Barnette
Guitars, Vocal bedtrack: Mark A. Shrider
Vocals and all backup: Christina Britton
Drums: Raul Rodriguez
Organ (B3) Al Bacon
Bass, Keys: Andy Gupta
Mixing/Mastering: Steffen Offermann

and the lyric...


Johnny
 
(vs)
Johnny likes to think he's a ladies man
an' now he's found another lady to play
A fake Rolex and a cruise ship tan
Am I supposed look the other way

I sent a text to all my friends
now they're knockin' on my door
they've come here to recommend
a few changes to our decor...

(ch)
O Johnny hasn't come home lately
I hear he found himself another pet
another poor sap who will call baby
for a ride in his old corvette
So the girls an' I are re-decoratin'
in a style that we call regret

(vs)
Remember that new dining set
Resting on the persian rug
it goes real well with the TV set
if you can find 'em underneath the mud

(vs)
The walls look good in vivid red
with the floors all painted black
a mirror used to hang above our bed
well now you see those ugly cracks

(ch)
Johnny hasn't come home lately
I hear he found himself another pet
another poor sap who will call baby
for a ride in his old corvette
So the girls an' I are re-decoratin'
in a style that we call regret

(vs)
the living room smells like someone died
an' the bathroom could use some work
But, it goes real nice with the pack of lies
from a wannabee Romeo jerk
 
(vs)
I'd pay good money to see his face
we really nailed his style
there are broken things all over the place
an' his clothes are in a burning pile

(ch)
Johnny hasn't come home lately
he found himself another pet
another poor sap who will call baby
for a ride in his old corvette
So the girls an' I are re-decoratin'
in a style we call regret

Johnny hasn't come home lately
he had a blonde and wants a brunette
well you might think i'm crazy
but honey, I ain't finished yet

« Last Edit: April 27, 2013, 04:14:57 PM by SWANSONG »


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Thanks for letting me get my hands on this wonderful song, Neil!

I think you forgot Andy Gupta (bass, keys) and figsound (I don't know his real name) on drums. The full list of credits should read like this IIRC:

Vocals: Christina Britton
Lyrics: John Williams
Guitars: Mark A. Shrider
Bass, Keys: Andy Gupta
Drums: figsound
Composition: you. ;)
Mixing/Mastering: Steffen Offermann

Regards,
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great to see this in the finished forum.
it was a pleasure working on this tune.
i would like to give an extra shout out to Johnny for recruiting me to work on this even though it was out of my comfort zone.
Johnny did a fantastic job pushing this song forward.
of course it started with a great groove created by Neil.
Then Johnny's lyrics helped move it to the structure we came up with.
And the glue that pulled it all together is the rhythm section of Andy and Figsounds.
***adding in the missed flavoring of Catfish --- when vanilla just ain't enough. thanks Al.
The icing on this already awesome cake is Christina's vocals --- playful & sassy.
and the a la mode...?...(you can't have cake without ice cream) what can I say about the mix Steffen gave us? superb as we've come to expect.
I am so proud to have been a part of this tune
It was great to work with each and everyone of you.

thanks...

Mark
« Last Edit: April 26, 2013, 08:56:56 PM by rightonthemark »
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hey lady and gentlemen' yall,

I can only echo(e of resonance  :P) what Mark put together so well.

A true collaborative effort, with everyone pitching in with loads of good ideas!! Initial bed (Neil), lyrics - Johnny (he redid his lyrics more times than I redid my bass Steffen  :D), Subsequent spade work and guitar (Mark), super vocals (Christina McHood), organ - Catfish??, Drums - Raul and lastly a great job in mixing this beastie - Steffen.

It was a blast!
Andy
« Last Edit: April 26, 2013, 03:52:36 PM by AndyG6508 »


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Steff,

Who played the organ track? Was it Catfish?
Andy
Thanks for letting me get my hands on this wonderful song, Neil!

I think you forgot Andy Gupta (bass, keys) and figsound (I don't know his real name) on drums. The full list of credits should read like this IIRC:

Vocals: Christina Britton
Lyrics: John Williams
Guitars: Mark A. Shrider
Bass, Keys: Andy Gupta
Drums: figsound
Composition: you. ;)
Mixing/Mastering: Steffen Offermann

Regards,
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Yes, Al Bacon, "Catfish" and his mood making B3  >:D

Neil, it's been a real pleasure working with you, and get well!
Great piece of inspiration... 8)

Mark, i just love your guitar work, and thank you for coming in so soon and working hard to make us a fabulous bedtrack!
We were both out of our comfort zone on this  ;D

Raul, you jumped on board from the start, and boy am i happy you did. The drums are perfect
Thank you

Al, Andy, Thank You for agreeing to add your marvelous talents to the project. i always feel lucky when i hear these finished works, and humbled to associate myself with guys like yourselves  :)
@Andy: you're right i think i did change the lyric more...that's pretty typical with me  :P

Christina, you sing your own praises
It's a master-work of a vocal, as all your pieces are
Thank You for answering my pleas, and for being as dedicated, during sooo much personal travail
(the board blowing in the studio was most likely our win) you are a choir of one! ;D

Thank you folks for the lyric Kudos, and Mark your aces in my book!
i need to get in contact with Marc Barnette
He should get a lyric nod for pointing me in the right direction  >:D
Thanks ev'rybody, it was fun an i'm looking forward to another!
Cheers 


Oops, Sorry Steffen, (trying to make sure i mentioned ev'rybody
and you fell thru the cracks! :-*
i'll send you my Andrew Sisters album to make up
You do have a 45 player, don't you  ::)
i know you do...Thank you ever so much S.
You and those magic ears will be paid handsomely one day
soon as we win that VH1 contest. Fingers crossed!
 




« Last Edit: April 26, 2013, 06:43:14 PM by Johnny »


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Thanks all again so kindly for all of your time and effort.s.
i never take thing s for granted. and especially all of this wonderful
talent here on  MCS..Again Christina i wish u the best for years to
come ...may god grant you good fortune in all you projects...
and the same for all else involved . god bless NEIL


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ummm, fellas the track has disappeared?  ???

Did the wrong version get up-loaded?

Steffen, i really do apologise...Your check is in the mail  ::)

cheers


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Indeed, it has. Neil probably unchecked the attachment box without noticing it. But the files are still on the thread in Studio "A":

MP3:
http://www.musicianscollaboration.com/forum/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=9484.0;attach=49220

APE:
http://www.musicianscollaboration.com/forum/index.php?action=dlattach;topic=9484.0;attach=49227

But be quick, I'll remove the APE pretty soon!

Regards,
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HI Yall.    the good ole boys are back in town and ladies. y all.

Seriously thanks so kindly all and i was not quite sure what Johnny Meant
in his mail to me. please clarify thanks  again god bless NEIL

I dont understand how the wrong song could have posted. as i had
only one mp3 on desktop  actually when i upload songs i try to only
have one as to avoid confusion. so . the good lord only know.s NEIL L.!

Again i uploaded the correct song have a grt wknd NEIL
« Last Edit: April 27, 2013, 03:40:27 PM by SWANSONG »


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Wow my friends kudos to you all! And congratulation to you Neil! This one turned out really great. Seems that good things come to those who wait  ;D.

Love the lyrics and vocals! That's a fun song, a nice little rocker. All involved in top shape.

Miss you.

Holger


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Thank You Holger  8)

Means a lot coming from you

sometimes it's just a fight to the finish...but we won! ;D







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Thanks Holger miss you also . and many thanks Johnny
we will all rock again soon god bless NEIL


 

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