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I ONLY WISH (Pop) Walter/PaulD/Benny/Doc

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Offline Benny

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Here's a pop tune started by Walter's lyric. I thoroughly enjoyed working on this one.

Walter Tokich - lyrics, bass
Paul Dowers - keyboards, drums
Benny Moore - melody, lyrics, acoustic guitar, vocals
Henry Mittnacht (Doc) - electric guitars

I ONLY WISH

You once wrote asking how I feel
But foolish pride kept it all concealed
Now I know what I should have said
Those words that go round, running through my head

(Chorus)
So I close my eyes and I step back in time
I only wish your heart was next to mine
After all these years it just won't fade away
I only wish that I could hold you close
And be with you today

Found your old letters and read each line
Revealing your heart and asking for mine
You wanted me, but I let go
And what I lost, girl I'll never know

(Chorus)
Now I close my eyes and I step back in time
I only wish your hand was holding mine
After all these years it just won't fade away
Girl, I only wish that I could hold you close
And be with you today

(Bridge)
We were so young
Passing notes in school
I didn't know that it was love
But I'm still here, wishing for you

(Chorus)
I close my eyes and I step back in time
And I only wish your heart was next to mine
After all these years it just won't fade away
Girl, I only wish that I could hold you close...

So I close my eyes and I step back in time
And I only wish your lips were kissing mine
After all these years it just won't fade away
Girl, I only wish that I could hold you close
And be with you today
« Last Edit: November 19, 2009, 09:53:33 PM by Benny »


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This is the kind of song I could listen to all day.  Writing, performances, and production are all superb. 8)

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Had my eye on this.  Sounds really nice!!

Great song and production guys!
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Really good songs guys...like this one alot.  Great performances and production. Benny you really know how to write a good melody. Excellent !

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Thanks All this ones been going a long time,its great to get another done :D



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Thanks Mark, CD, and John.

Paul, you did a great instrumental track. Excellent stuff in there.

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