Mine...All Mine

[holmezzombiacus]

This is my first finished project here at MC. Its been a pleasure meeting all of you cool, talented people . There have been songs posted by other artists at MC that really, RREALLY impressed me. I think this song "Mine....All Mine" will stand with them. Special thanks to our cast of characters:

                    Casia - Lyricist -Lyrics
                    Tricia Dovidio (tricia41)- Vocals
                    Vincent- Lead Guitar
                    Smurf- Drums/Mixing
                    Holmez Zombiacus- Rythm and Bass Guitars


Lyrics
Mine...All Mine

(V1)
Every eye is watching
Mad men walk the seas
And I'll kiss you deeply
Beneath the bitter trees

(V2)
Dulcimer of misfortune
Is playin' our tune
I forgot the starving nights
That left our love in ruin

(Chorus)
I wanna change the world
Make you mine
I want every moment
To change the path of time
Make you mine...all mine

(V3)
When we're standing helpless
In love's eternal wake
The mermaids of bittnerness
Will swim us to our fate

(V4)
Swallowed by the darkness
Wearing a mask of lies
Passion is the gentle touch
That keeps our love alive

(Chorus)
I wanna change the world
Make you mine
I want every moment
To change the path of time
And make you mine

- solo -

(bridge)
Seven degrees of emptiness
Toss you with the tide
If I take that giant leap
I'll get you on my side

The lighthouse in the distance
Reflects the rocky shores
You're searchin for a beacon
I'm the only cure
(The only cure)

(V1)
Every eye is watching
Mad men walk the seas
A heart full of bitterness
Drives them to insanity

(Chorus)
I wanna change the world
Make you mine
I want every moment
To make you mine all mine


I look forward to writing some more great tracks with you guyz.....Peace HZ

[Casia - lyricist]

Hi:

I enjoyed this collaboration very much.  Very nice final result.  Thanks everyone.  Here's the file to listen to the song.

[PVD]

Everyone:

Very good listen, enjoyed it. 

Good lyrics Casia.

HZ good first!

Paul

[Billy]

Hey! This is a groovy little track. Nice vocal performance Tricia. Great guitar sounds Vincent. Nice and tight rythm section and a very jolly listen all round. Smart lyrics deserve a smart backing track. I'm listening again. 

[Donna]

Ooooh, very nice all round, people!   
Love that instrumental solo too.
Good vocals here, Tricia. 

Donna

[Tricia41]

Thanks for compliments.

I just wanna say WOW! I love how this turned out!! I remember first hearing Hz's track and thinking, "It's gonna be tricky to find a melody, but I liked the music and Casia's lyrics.   Then Vincent and Smurf came along and made it great!!  So worth the wait! This one is fun to sing!!!!!!!!!

[Smurf]

It was a blast to do, and I also feel that it turned out great. It is easy to mix something when the tracks almost mix themselves, and that is what happened here. Everyone was on their toes and gave it a great effort!

Good Job Folks!

[Sharpola]

Nice one guys!

I like Tricia's vocals
and the lead guitars tasty

Ray

[Vincent]

This was a fun song to work on...Smurf did and excellent job on the drum track to finish up the tune.

The vocals and lyrics are nice as well and the overall Rhythm and bass sound decent in the song as well.

Nice job guys.

 

[Studioplayer]

Excellent guys. Nice first. Love the choruses. Nice groove. Killer lead guitar on this. Tricia sings em all. Go girl!!   

Dave