Orphan Train - Sharpola / MM

[Sharpola]

[NickT]

That sounds cool Ray. Different for you!

I like the lyrics Mike.

Nick

[MM]

Hey Ray... sounds real good... I'm glad we made those minor changes, it runs smoother vocally....

I'm in work and can't crank the sound.... is that the sound of a train in the first 22 seconds? 

Mike

[CosmicDolphin]

Cool...I like the way the guitar pickin' kinda sounded like a train on the tracks. 

CD

[PVD]

Mike/Ray:

Very nice and quick too.  I like the point of reference for the story.

Paul

[jwoo10]

Excellent song... as Nick alluded to.. a departure fro the norm for you ray.. mike Great Lyrics! I agree.

I'd have liked to hear a single kick drum thumping the time out.. would have worked for me.. and added I think to the potency of the message.. but thats just me.. a drummer... what do I know..

A+ on this one fellas!

[Studioplayer]

Very nice Ray. Love the finger picking guitar. Works really good just guitar & voice. Gives it that bluesy groove. Kinda old school. 

[TallPaul]

Sounds great, guys!

I'd love to hear some harmony vocals like in the movie "Brother, Where Art Though."

Paul

[Sharpola]

Actually Paul I can hear your voice doing this one... interested?


Ray

[TallPaul]

I'd be honored to give it a try, Ray! I may have to sing it an octave lower but that could sound pretty good. Do you have a voxless?
Paul

[TallPaul]

Ray, it would help to have your vox sep as well for reference purposes. I tried panning hard right on your mix above, but there's still guitar in the mix.
Paul

[Sharpola]

Nick, could you purge this thread and we'll redo when the songs complete?

Thanks
Ray