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She's In My Head - Sharpola / MM

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Music - Sharpola
Lyrics - MM

She's In My Head
(c) 2007 Michael Taub

(Verse 1)
She's a full fledged knockout
From the wrong side of the tracks
A high school dropout
A master of acrobatic sex


(Verse 2)
I keep-a stumblin' my words
Whenever we're together
But when we're apart
Her vision stays with me forever


(Chorus)
Cause she's in my head
From dusk to dawn
She's in my head
And I find it hard to move on

She's in my head
There ain't no doubt
She's in my head
And I can't shake her out

She's in my head
She's in my head

(Verse 3)
I was once crowned the king
In the land of one-night stands
When girls would call back
I made sure I already had plans


(Verse 4)
But she caught me off guard
Pushed me down from my thrown
And when I looked up
I found I was no longer alone

(Chorus)
Cause she's in my head
From dusk to dawn
She's in my head
And I find it hard to move on

She's in my head
There ain't no doubt
She's in my head
And I can't shake her out

She's in my head
She's in my head


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Diggin' the drop riffage!

Nice syncopation in the bridge.

This Rawks!

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Fantastic song guys!  Ray....love your sound!  Very cool.   8)

Lisa


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Ray...

Way cool....  I'm going to have nightmares from this one...   >:D

Great job,

Mike



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Thanks guys!

Hmmm this is one of those tunes that sounded good making it, but now a couple days have past and it kinda blows...  ;D

I'll re-work it sometime in the future

Ray


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Ray,

My only concerns is with the Bridge (vs 3 & 4 on lyric sheet)...

Mike




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Ray,

Gave this a re-listen.... the chorus sounds way too good to throw on the backburner for too long....   

Mike



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