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Forever 17

 

Offline mickbrit55

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A disturbing song about a serial killers victim.

Words and Music : Mick Lovering/Steve Perrett

Steve Perrett : Guitars / Drums / Synths / Bass
Mick Lovering : Guitar


Forever Seventeen

The information highway
Hit stop signs in her head
Preaching at the pulpit
For a dream already dead

Cream cakes in the ashtrays
Lightning in your dream
The bullet in her brain
Makes her forever seventeen

<CH>
Forever seventeen
The ultimate beauty queen
You will reign supreme
Forever seventeen

Time lapse photography
Liaisons with the dead
Laughing at the Jackal
As it runs around your head

Kissing sticky duct tape
The plastic bag obscene
A shackle on her leg
Makes her forever seventeen

<CH>

<BRIDGE>
What makes a man love you like that
What puts the bullet into your hat
Who pulls the gun
Who pops the dream
Who tears the flesh
When you are only seventeen

Facebook made her certain
That dreams become nightmares
In a world that's black and white
Where no one really cares

Stillness in the culvert
For ninety days unseen
The bullet in her head
Makes her forever seventeen
Very funny Spok ... now beam down my trousers.
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 :) Excellent.
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I almost had it then...?


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Offline PVD

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Very powerful song with powerful lyrics.

Well done

Paul


Offline docmidnite

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The morbidity transports well with the music!
Cool!


Offline Paulo

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Nice Mick... That's a melancholic tune, I like it.
Live the best you can 'cause you're gonna be dead for a long time.
Respect
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Offline rightonthemark

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sounds great.
music and melody melds quite well...and even the dark subject matter.
rock-n-roll ain't pretty --- that's why they picked us to play it.
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Offline mickbrit55

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Thanks guys ... appreciate the comments :)

Mick.
Very funny Spok ... now beam down my trousers.
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Offline CosmicDolphin

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Wow that's dark !  >:D

Interesting stuff  8)

We never finish a mix... we simply abandon them.
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Offline Billy

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Blimey, Mick. That's pretty dark stuff.

Music picks up nicely....almost a "funeral march" feel to it. Nice solo.....wails nicely as if the girls spirit is crying out.

Excellent stuff.


Offline mickbrit55

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Thanks for listening Billy and CD. Dark stuff indeed. I got the idea from watching ID Discovery.

Mick.
Very funny Spok ... now beam down my trousers.
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Offline CosmicDolphin

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Thanks for listening Billy and CD. Dark stuff indeed. I got the idea from watching ID Discovery.

Mick.

What's ID Discovery ?
We never finish a mix... we simply abandon them.
You can't polish a turd, but you can always spray paint it GOLD
Great songs are not written, they are re-witten


Offline mickbrit55

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It's a TV channel dedicated to murders, serial killers etc.

Mick.
Very funny Spok ... now beam down my trousers.
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It's a TV channel dedicated to murders, serial killers etc.

Mick.

Nice !  ;D
We never finish a mix... we simply abandon them.
You can't polish a turd, but you can always spray paint it GOLD
Great songs are not written, they are re-witten



 

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