Musicians Collaboration Studio
Virtual Music Studio => Finished Works => Topic started by: Benny on May 28, 2012, 12:07:35 PM
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This is a song I wrote with a summer theme. I started it last year and resurrected it last week. Mick jumped in with a very cool lead guitar riff in the chorus that glued it all together. And then Doc came along and added piano, synth, and more guitars. Thank you guys very much for making this one happen.
Mickbrit55 - lead guitar
Doc - piano, synth, guitars, harmony lead guitar
Benny - vocals, acoustic guitar, picking electric guitar, bass & drum programing, mixing
MY FEELINGS ALWAYS SHOW
Benny Moore
The winter's gone
The summer's here
Seems like forever
Since you appeared
Let's walk on the sand
And take in the sun
You're looking better than ever
You've always been the one
CHORUS
Can't you see
Don't you know
When you're with me
My feelings always show
How long I've waited
To talk to you
To see you smile again
The way you do
If you'll take my hand
I'll take you on a ride
Summers don't get better than this
We'll leave the world behind
CHORUS
BRIDGE
All I do is dream about the love that runs so deep
And everyone can see the infatuation that I always keep
It's getting late
The breeze is warm
Sunsets are magic
With you in my arms
CHORUS (2X)
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Thanks for letting me play, Benny. Very fun collab and the result is fantastic! Well done :)
Mick.
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I ran the mix through some mastering software just to try it out. ???
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Sounds great guys... the song really highlights your vocals Benny! :)
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I agree, it's got a nice 'summer' feel about it. Would sound great on the radio as you were washing your car or even driving your car around town.
Your vocals are sublime, Benny. Everything is just right on this song. A wonderful collaboration.
Billy.
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Hi all,
What a great "summer feel" song!!
Well done all of you!!
Great mix too...I'm very jealous!!!
Jimbo
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Nice job guys! I like the sea gulls and ocean! Glad you left it in. :)
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Beautifull and fresh, I like it.
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Hey guys...thank you for all the great comments. :)
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Solid pop as we are used to hear from you, Benny. Well done.
Regards,
Steffen
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Steffen...thanks for having a listen and for the "well done". :)
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Pro sound, guys! Love the harmonies!
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Look who's alive. ;)
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Look who's alive. ;)
Let the flailing begin! :-)
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Can't believe I didn't comment yet. Very enjoyable as always Benny et al.
Casia x
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Really nice song Benny, I like the melody build at the end of the chorus - great stuff.
The bridge was an unexpected detour, very skillfully pulled off.
I preferred it before you mastered it, still think the unmastered mix is lacking some warmth and bottom end and you seem to always thin your vocal out quite alot , I'd really like to hear the full fat Benny vocals on your songs as they are the 'money' track.
CD