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Title: She's In My Head - Sharpola / MM
Post by: Sharpola on April 17, 2007, 01:11:47 AM

Music - Sharpola
Lyrics - MM

She's In My Head
(c) 2007 Michael Taub

(Verse 1)
She's a full fledged knockout
From the wrong side of the tracks
A high school dropout
A master of acrobatic sex

(Verse 2)
I keep-a stumblin' my words
Whenever we're together
But when we're apart
Her vision stays with me forever

(Chorus)
Cause she's in my head
From dusk to dawn
She's in my head
And I find it hard to move on

She's in my head
There ain't no doubt
She's in my head
And I can't shake her out

She's in my head
She's in my head
(Verse 3)
I was once crowned the king
In the land of one-night stands
When girls would call back
I made sure I already had plans

(Verse 4)
But she caught me off guard
Pushed me down from my thrown
And when I looked up
I found I was no longer alone
(Chorus)
Cause she's in my head
From dusk to dawn
She's in my head
And I find it hard to move on

She's in my head
There ain't no doubt
She's in my head
And I can't shake her out

She's in my head
She's in my head

Title: Re: She's In My Head - Sharpola / MM
Post by: NickT on April 17, 2007, 08:43:15 AM

Diggin' the drop riffage!

Nice syncopation in the bridge.

This Rawks!

Nick

Title: Re: She's In My Head - Sharpola / MM
Post by: Dove4Simon on April 17, 2007, 09:10:29 AM

Fantastic song guys!  Ray....love your sound!  Very cool.   8)

Lisa

Title: Re: She's In My Head - Sharpola / MM
Post by: MM on April 17, 2007, 11:20:52 PM

Ray...

Way cool....  I'm going to have nightmares from this one...   >:D

Great job,

Mike

Title: Re: She's In My Head - Sharpola / MM
Post by: Sharpola on April 18, 2007, 08:56:02 AM

Thanks guys!

Hmmm this is one of those tunes that sounded good making it, but now a couple days have past and it kinda blows...  ;D

I'll re-work it sometime in the future

Ray

Title: Re: She's In My Head - Sharpola / MM
Post by: MM on April 18, 2007, 10:16:03 AM

Ray,

My only concerns is with the Bridge (vs 3 & 4 on lyric sheet)...

Mike

Title: Re: She's In My Head - Sharpola / MM
Post by: youtube on April 24, 2007, 09:08:14 AM

Nice work as always.

Tubes  :D

Title: Re: She's In My Head - Sharpola / MM
Post by: mrVermin on May 16, 2007, 05:20:07 PM

cool! :o

Title: Re: She's In My Head - Sharpola / MM
Post by: MM on January 12, 2008, 02:33:37 PM

Ray,

Gave this a re-listen.... the chorus sounds way too good to throw on the backburner for too long....   

Mike

Title: Re: She's In My Head - Sharpola / MM
Post by: Sharpola on January 12, 2008, 05:36:21 PM

Okee dokee, I'll revisit this one..

Ray